Wow. Just...wow
I think that this belongs more in the classical or general rock categories (There should be a category for a blend of the two), but I found it anyway, and I'm glad I did! I think that you could have taken out 4:14-4:32 because it was weak and because that pattern was repeated enough afterwards. I loved all the different sounds you used, especially that startup/powerup/whatever sound (the one that starts low and ends high) scattered in there. The melody was good. It seemed like it was spur of the moment improv, not planned out, but it still worked. You used the instruments well and made magic with your music. You could have ended it at 6:24 and made the second half into a different song. It seems like this is part of a series, but this is the first one I saw. If the others are like this, you've got an album ready! There are a few parts you could cut, but other than that, this song was excellent!